Chapter 6 Pg 126 !!NSFW!!

 

February 4th, 2015, 7:29 pm





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Opinions Please Hey guys,

I would like some opinions on the sex in this.
Is it too much?
Should I rate the comic as mature?
Would you like me to tone it down?
Or would you like me to rate the comic as mature and make it more explicit?

Or is it fine as it is?

I'm curious, I don't want this comic to be flagged as offensive or not properly rated... but I also want to give you guys what you want as well... I am happy to draw more sex, or less sex.

Let me know! :D
Mr Xvious, January 31st, 2015, 8:31 pm Reply
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Well uh...

Trying to put an artistic/story point of view, the sex certainly puts the mature theme up in a heartbeat. I like the emotions that come from these scenes. Although personally, makes me double check my roommate isn't around so he won't get the wrong idea what I am doing. Just reading a comic.

Overall, the amount of sex feels about right: popping up here and there occasionally. If somebody says they want these to be more explicit, then certainly consider their opinion over mine. I'm more of a moderate on these matters. Sex, it's complicated.
I most say...

I love the change of drawing style, it does look waaay better, awesome work <3

And about the sex question. I don't know, I agree with the first comment though I wouldn't mind more sexy scenes I like that in this webcomic in particular sex isn't the central subject, but is part of life and dosen't hide, as in mainstrem pictures where sex is all idelized and out of camera and untochable. Well, that's my personal opinion
Mmm occasionally you could put a little bit more spicy scenes when the moment gets more romantic maybe ;) But either way I think is fine as it is!! So keep up the amazing work!!! Thumbs UP!!
@Author Jakes: Haha I know what you mean, I always check my other half isn't around to draw these, not that they would mind. Something is slightly embarrassing about it though!

I'm glad you like the level of sex, I didn't want it to dominate the comic, but sex does happen in relationships, especially when the characters age to an adult level... so it leave it out would have been weird. I'm probably going to keep it the same!

@Marion-999: I'm so happy you like the design change! When I started the comic I had lost myself a little... I was working a job I hated in long hours and lived too far away to have a social life... so I stopped drawing and got very depressed. This comic actually helped pick me up a lot! but you can see the drawing style suffered A LOT at first. I've only just found myself in the last couple of months and am finally happy with a set style. Though the challenge now is adapting what is sort of an established look into the new style!
I really want to re-draw the comic when I am finished and first fix many minor things I would change in the story, and fix the drawing style!

I'm glad you like the sex level in this. I really didn't want to idealise sex to be more than what it actually is. Sex is something people crave and do regularly, especially in the situations Alice is in... but it isn't like people fantasise it is. Nothing annoys me more than unrealistic sex scenes (mostly seen in BL stories... no lube and "pain becoming pleasure"... seriously who writes this!?) I'm going to keep the sex the same... as far as I see I tagged the comic as 16+ and you never see genitals... boobs though :P so it doesn't need a mature tag.

@Neptunian Princess: Glad you like it! And yeah, later in the comic there will be a bit more to the sex scenes... but nothing too graphic... just a bit of build up rather than just BAM SEX panel there is now!
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(Looks like I'm late for the update)
Seems good as is, if you ask me. :D

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